I've been doing a lot of live writing lately.
Live Writing: [Verb] The act of using a messenger service to write to a live audience, generally making stuff up as you go.
This is what has come of it, enjoy.
I had her. She was finally mine again.
Live Writing: [Verb] The act of using a messenger service to write to a live audience, generally making stuff up as you go.
This is what has come of it, enjoy.
I had her. She was finally mine again.
She made small fussing noises as I
wrapped her into my quick carry sling, but settled down almost immediately. A
warmth filled my heart as I looked at her, sleeping against my chest.
A thud followed by a shout behind me. I
needed escape, now.
The magical lanterns that floated near
the top of the cavern were dimming, signaling the set of the above ground sun.
Night was magical in the underground.
Millions of lights formed a blanket of stars. We could always see them clearly,
they were always with us. It's what made leaving that all behind so much
harder.
More clamors from behind me, shit.
Sawyer was up at the exit with the vehicle, waiting for me.
I leapt into the comfort of the shadows, letting them guide me to my destination.
I leapt into the comfort of the shadows, letting them guide me to my destination.
I danced in between the shadows,
keeping a steady lead on my pursuers. I'd love to see them try to take back
what was mine. They'd already backed me into this corner, it was time I started
pushing back.
The harsh electrical like of the cavern
entrance was in front of me. Almost there.
"Fayth! Stop." A familiar voice
called from behind me. "Why are you taking this child?" His eyes were
heavy with pity and sorrow.
"I will not have her involved in
all this, Lukas."
"In all of what? This is her
birthright, YOUR birthright. Though you have forsaken it, this place is still
your home." His arms were spread wide, as if to embrace me. Maybe he
thought I was stupid, for a sparkle gave away the knife stashed up his sleeve.
"You know very well what I'm
talking about. This cloak and dagger. My parents." I was trying to keep my
voice down; I didn't want to wake the baby. I felt my hands heating up as I
fumed with anger.
"Stay with me, mi amore." His
entire expression changed. His chiseled features softened, his lavender eyes
filling with promises and regrets.
"No." My entire body ached,
magic burned at my finger tips, wanting to rip free. "You cannot have this
child." I released the fire, channeling it down my arm and onto the floor
that separated us
Hey, it's Ashley. I didn't have time to read all your posts. I just read a couple here and there. It was a little confusing since I was jumping all over the place, but I did get a feel for your writing style. I love the imagery. When I write I tend to focus on emotions and characters' thoughts and forget to mention anything about sights, sounds, or smells. I really like the detail you put into it. It's very poetic sounding. Once I go back and actually read the whole thing, I'll let you know what I think of the story.
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